ERRATA IN DESIGNING DWARFS IN THE DESERT,
Some Additions, and the Continuation of Our Story



 

     In the interest of historical accuracy, the following are errors now known to exist in this book.  A handful of typographical errors, verbs not agreeing with the noun number, multiple use of the same descriptive word on a single page, too large bottom margins on pages 14 and 15, etc. are also in there but do not require further comment.  In the maroon braces below can be found the word or passage in question.  In bold is the correction.   If you are aware of any other significant discrepencies, please e-mail rjb@phoenixbonsai.com .

 
pg. ii, bottom :  PayBS       Payson Bonsai Society             Spell check software is only good up to a point.  (If this were an edition of the Bible, it would be called the Parson Version.)
pg. 23, top :  These were "smuggled" into the state...  }           The quotes should be around the word to better reflect the kidding manner with which Mr. Jacobson related this anecdote.
pg. 28, top :   {  Listed as supplying labor for the garden pool which was built there: Paul Matsusaki of Toyo Nurseries.  }     Per a conversation with Elsie Andrade, Feb. 26, 2000 at the Matsuri display, Paul would never have used the black volcanic rock which makes up the sides of the pond.  The sentence in question is derived from the Oct. 27, 1963 Arizona Republic article "'Here's How' Gardens."  Did Paul just do the labor with other-specified materials?  Would he have used materials in a design he did not agree with?  According to Elsie, no.
pg. 30, top :   {   Afterwards [Rex Tsutsumida] moved to Cleveland, Ohio and then New York where he learned English by watching the motion pictures which were changed weekly.   }      Per a conversation with Rex, Feb. 26, 2000 at the Matsuri display -- the first chance RJB had to speak with Mr. Tsutsumida since the latter's move from the Valley in 1989 -- the subject knew English quite well before moving to Cleveland.  I have not found the specific reference in my book notes, but I believe the information came from a conversation with Leroy.  I apologize if I misunderstood.

 
 
     Three additions to the text could be as follows:
pg. 62, bottom photo caption :   Sam Lew, Jr. (right of center) models a club jacket.
pg. 75, bottom photo caption :    The height from base to top is approximately 15 inches.
A chart showing the length of daylight throughout the year in the Phoenix area was cut due to space considerations.  It can now be found on our Seasonal Care page.
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